Tuesday, March 22, 2011

Do Now: PSSA WRITING TEST:

6 To begin an aerobic exercise program, an individual should determine his or her resting heart rate—the rate at which the heart beats when it is not under physical stress. 7 Once the resting heart rate have been determined, you are ready to begin aerobic activity. 8 The heart rate must remain above the resting rate continuously for fifteen minutes in order for the exercise to be benificial to the heart.

Questions:
1. Which change corrects the error in pronoun use in sentence 7?

A. Once the resting heart rate has been determined, we are ready to begin aerobic activity.

B. Once the resting heart rate has been determined, one is ready to begin aerobic activity. 

C. Once the resting heart rate has been determined, they are ready to begin aerobic activity. 

D. Once the resting heart rate has been determined, I am ready to begin aerobic activity.

Classwork: We will continue with your rough drafts today.
We will be reviewing introductions and conclusions for the formal essay.
We will be peer editing.
Homework: Your polished essay is due Thursday. These are to be well organized with a clear thesis statement, proofread, and have indent paragraphs.